Don't really care for golden shower stories, but you certainly have a mastery of using language lyrically. Your imagery is exceptional and dreamlike. You're very good. Keep on writing!
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Anonymous06/16/14
Placement
Even with the D/s element, this would be better in the Fetish section. You would find more interested parties there.
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Anonymous06/16/14
welcome to literotica
Υou are really a talented writer and a gifted person and i am glad to see that you finally posted one of your stories here . Hope there will be more to come quite soon.
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Anonymous06/17/14
Wow
Great story and well written. I'd love to be taken to a party and used as the toilet by everyone there
English
Good writing on a subject I don't care for
Don't really care for golden shower stories, but you certainly have a mastery of using language lyrically. Your imagery is exceptional and dreamlike. You're very good. Keep on writing!
Placement
Even with the D/s element, this would be better in the Fetish section. You would find more interested parties there.
welcome to literotica
Υou are really a talented writer and a gifted person and i am glad to see that you finally posted one of your stories here . Hope there will be more to come quite soon.
Wow
Great story and well written. I'd love to be taken to a party and used as the toilet by everyone there
Thank you!
Thank you ever so much for the positive feedback!
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