All Comments on 'Husband Leads Valerie into BDSM'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Could have been better

This needs to be edited.

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 10 years ago

And hubby gets to be a member for

a. Breathing

b. Bringing in fresh meat

Okie dokie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
STOP WRITING

Stop writing, eat shit and die!

rodryder44rodryder44about 5 years ago
Leading Valerie

How Val kept her fetish from hubby is curious.

nakedguyatxnakedguyatx9 months ago

Good concept; hot story. But horribly written. Keep writing, but get an editor next time.

AmbulAmbul4 months ago

The story moves along briskly, but does need an editor. Valerie’s cravings for cock and pain make for a good story.

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