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It is far from being a flop ...
... but it is a little on the short side and I'm sure it would benefit from a careful rewrite, when it would be worth a higher score than I have given it. Well done on your first outing into story-telling and please, please, keep on writing. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
Beautiful!
Very sweet
A well crafted vignette. I enjoyed it very much.
5 stars
Beautiful. I like the softness. :3
If this is BDSM
You certainly make it sound attractive.
This is a very good first story that deserves a much higher rating than it is currently receiving. I hope my 5 star vote helps.
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