All Comments on 'An Unusual Companionship Ch. 01'

Very good story I like how you've used the existing characters so far. Keep it up.

ME is probably my favourite Xbox rpg, to have someone writing about the main noteworthy characters, especially the Asari femme fatales, is great. Benezia is a total goddess, a MILF of the highest degree. Need more of this story, having the younger mad Dantius daughter well and truly fucked by a human stud and then tossed aside might just explain her mental imbalance somewhat. Shiala in ME1 is a total babe, having her wrapped up with a couple of gorgeous girls, lips softly kissing, fingers caressing each others intimate places....ohhhhh, write more, please.

Great story so far, it really does try to draw you into the world but all of a sudden it ends at a cliff hanger and no follow up chapter. So obviously it needs at least one more chapter.

He has multiple chapters of this story as well as many other stories up on his fanfiction.Net profile of the same name (CobaltAC) you should check it out if you haven't already.Sorry for being 1 year late lol.