Neighborhood Dad Ch. 11

One nibble at a time

I have mixed feelings about the length of your chapters, but the quality is done so well that I would probably want more even if they were longer! It's interesting how one can look back on the path and see how small deviations along the way cause you end up in an area vastly different than where you assumed you'd be. Henry didn't envision a relationship with a girl his daughter's age, and yet that's all his heart desires. You've done a great job illustrating his journey and I look forward to more!

The Continuing Saga

I agree with OneIBlind about the length of the chapters. They are disconcertingly short. Too short for any real interplay between more than a couple of characters at a time. But I disagree OIB about the story as a whole. It has ALWAYS been about Henry and Randi. But with the short chapters it is hard to tell where the story is going.

neighborhood dad

what a story, you have me hooked , keep it coming you have a true talent

If he wanted something easy on her fingers to start with, he should have gotten her a nylon string guitar instead, that way you also get a better instrument for your money since you don't have to spend half of it on an amp that's usually crap anyway in that price range.

I would never recommend that a beginner started out on an electric guitar unless they were willing to shell out a significant amount of cash, even then it's probably better to keep things simple in the beginning.