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Lovely
simply lovely way of describing universal experience.
Death - rebirth - death .............
& the cycle goes on .....................5-ed.
5ed
I like the structure of this
I like the words (maybe because I plastered ghost riders in the threads)
but these three lines are primo:
As a fire clears a field of stubble,
So too will that wind make us clean.
Then back to living we will stumble,
Strong and Vivid
I don't know that I have ever seen that kind of pain described as well, Clearday. Moving without being sentimental - even in the last stanza where it could have easily have gone that way. Strong, masculine, beautiful writing.
thank you for the read
The whole piece speaks to me as a man resigned to his fate but acceptance has been made.
strong masculine writing, the I will soldier the fuck on.
Your final stanza is as good as anything I have read.
Thank you
Thank you Trixa, Ashe, 1201 (I have absolutely no idea what the ghost riders on the threads are), Oldbear & Tod.
These verses were written a good many years ago with certain specific losses very much in mind. This was sort of rolling them together and seeing then what was there.
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