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The Contrast Ch. 05

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by Anonymous06/21/14

spelling . . .

I really like this story, however your spelling could use some proofreading. I hope you continue this story.

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by Anonymous07/12/14

Your English is very charming

Although your command of English is not perfect, it serves the story by enhancing the fantasy. I can see Balok and Rose not quite speaking the same language, but still understanding each other.

I am a native English speaker who is also multilingual. In this case, I don't find the English errors distracting or annoying.

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