I have read some 4 and 5 pagers that did not say as much as this one. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous07/25/14
True love and romance. Thank you.
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Anonymous08/15/14
Good ending,,,:-)
Many people seem to take for granted that those we love wil continue on after we pass. No one ever can truly predict how they will respond to the death of a loved one. I like to think that if anyone in my family were to pass that I would soldier on...your story made me wonder just how successful at it I would be.
How would I deal with the emotions of it? Would I think the same way,that I wasn't "Good enough" to save them? That I somehow let them down? Good story. Surprised it rated so low. Probably because you didn't have mind altering, cum-swapping, nasty sweaty sex. :-)
I don't think that was applicable to this story at all. You did it as Goldilocks said, "Just right!"
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Excellent
Short, but very powerful. Thank you.
Great Short Story*****
I have read some 4 and 5 pagers that did not say as much as this one. Thanks for sharing.
True love and romance. Thank you.
Good ending,,,:-)
Many people seem to take for granted that those we love wil continue on after we pass. No one ever can truly predict how they will respond to the death of a loved one. I like to think that if anyone in my family were to pass that I would soldier on...your story made me wonder just how successful at it I would be.
How would I deal with the emotions of it? Would I think the same way,that I wasn't "Good enough" to save them? That I somehow let them down? Good story. Surprised it rated so low. Probably because you didn't have mind altering, cum-swapping, nasty sweaty sex. :-)
I don't think that was applicable to this story at all. You did it as Goldilocks said, "Just right!"
Sincerely, Payenbrant
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