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All Comments on 'I want it now'

by Scheherazade88

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ReefBeachReefBeachabout 8 years ago
This is great

But make it poetry! Break the lines, get a rhythm, use assonance and dissonance, make it sing.

guysimple1674guysimple1674over 5 years ago
This is so erotic

This poem shows what a strong woman wants, her strength is her sensuousness. She knows what eroticism is all about.

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