Long Day at Work?

Why was this posted in this category? Incredibly short story that was a waste of time!

Terrible writing

Learn how to write.

Reread it

How was this a first tme story? Not a very good one at that! Look up the hall of fame and see how good writers write.

Just to let you know..

First of all Id like to point out the hilarity in the fact that the first two negative comments, the commenters didn't even have the balls to post their username, not to mention the fact that they are litterally, sitting at home, jerking off, while talking about how I can't write, but they are trashing talking the work of a high school sophmore.

Secondly, I wrote this story back when I was a sophomore (I'm nineteen now) and I was a virgin then so no, its not the best work you've ever seen, but again, your hiding behind a computer screen.

Thirdly, I published my first novel when I was in sixth grade, since then I've published five novels, a triliogy, a series, two sequels, a how to book, and an autobiography. So I think I know what what I'm doing, sure there are mistakes, but I typed it fast because I was in a hurry.

Do the world a favor and grow up, thanks

Ps. If you're going to write nasty comments, expect them in return.