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Hi Sue, _ Well Written!
I'm sure a lot of readers, will find this story very enjoyable to read. - Like I said it is well written and I do like the storyline about a girl with an unusual psychic ability, or as Ginny, put it "witchy powers". - When I read, "I'd known for a while that I was bisexual if not gay", this did give me hope, that your story would have some girl on girl, lesbian sex.
My name is Katrina, I'm not just a little bit Gay or Bisexual. I'm a full on lesbian! With No Apologies!!!
What I was looking too read, was a all girl, hot lesbian sex story, but then that's the story I'm always looking to read. - And since I jump over everything with Jake, and that nauseating blowjob. - I don't feel it would be fair of me too judge something, I know nothing about, thank God..
Even though I wasn't able to enjoy reading this story, I feel comfortable giving this story a 5-star rating, based on your other stories, and your writing ability..
(P.S.)
Sue, Is there any possibility of an "Overtime Ch. 03" in the future? PLEASE!
I read in "ScattySue's Biography" that one of your fetishes is "toilet games". - If you read my comments on "Overtime Ch. 02" you know that I'm into fetish play toilet games or toilet parties. - With my girlfriends growing up in Austria, pee play for us was just a warm up, to get the party going..
Gay Kat.
Be patient!
Gay Cat,
Don't worry, your hopes will be answered in later parts!
Sue
A small amendment
I have made a slight change to the story after a someone questioned why Ginny should choose to reveal her ability. I hope the edit helps to answer that question.
As ever, all constructive criticism is welcome as I continue to learn to write better.
ScattySue
Great story ;)
I've never commented before on a story, but I thought I should tell you you did a great job! I like the sci-fi angle on it. Reminds me of Fringe. Can't wait to read more.
Impressive
Nice bit of story telling.
J
Thought out
What I've read so far this is a well-thought-out story left me hanging and out of breath can't wait to read the next chapter I read a number of your stories scatty soon and I love the all.
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