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Only this?
The story ends here?
If your wife is like that
You should get divorced. Who wants a slut for a wife? And your story falls short. If you were attempting to be clever in your brevity, you failed. If you were trying to create mystery by the lack of information and detail, you failed. The story simply wasn't interesting or entertaining.
Where's the beef
You've done a decent set up, now finish it. What happened? Is their relationship still good? Why the change in pattern? Does the change cause a change in their relationship? Make the cuckold like it more or decrease his satisfaction. To be truthful, I don't get you cucks.
Looking forward to the next chapter...
I am certainly hoping there is another chapter... We NEED to hear what happened as she tells her husband all about it!!! Certainly would love for my own wife to do something like this...
Congrats
Nice job, very nice. An erotic story that could almost have been published in the Saturday Evening Post!!
Story sure doesn't make me want a slut wife.
No love here, what a awful life, yuck.
nicely done start to a series!
More please !
Great start
hope to see more series of Rachel and her adventures.
Good first effort.
Keep writing, you have a talent . Would love to see chapter 2 here.
Good Start
Not sure why so many comments always attack the writer in these LW stories, and hope we get to see more posts of her obvious sexuality.
Hot start for cuckold's adventure.
I do hope you do a chapter two and three. Fill us in on all of it. Him eating and swallowing the thick, hot creampie.
good start
I like yourstory but it definitely needs a sequel or two.
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