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Great beginning
Please continue ASAP!
NO!!!
This may be the the most agrevating cliffhanger I have come across in a story on this site in a LONG while. JUST as the story was getting substantial- It just stops!! Nothing is really known yet, We don't know ANYTHING about the fiances point of view yet, please,please continue.
Agreed
Agree with both comments. Need more! Seems like a good beginning but not enough information. Need the next chapter and hopefully a longer one.
*smiles*
Great beginning and teaser for a potentially delicious story. i greatly encourage you to continue writing and expound on this storyline. Don't leave us hanging so soon. *grins*
this story is very similar to bloodsong...
Oh seriously, we need more of this story. Like now, please.
Bloodsong clone
I'm guessing the author is a fan of Lady Mira? Who can blame him or her but it would be good to see it branch off into a different direction.
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