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Shy Friend Shows Your Wife His Cock

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by devilspy06/26/14

Drinking

Very well done. Dan's large cock sure did the trick. After all the hot wife dressing like she did gave him the boner. Only fair she takes care of it. lol To bad he did not unload in her hot wet tight pussy. Hubby walks away from this really enjoying seeing his wife as a slut. She gave it all up for Dan's thick long cock. Not to mention his massive load. One time thing? Time will tell.

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by Oatmeal196907/26/14

Fun story

only complaint would be that it's written in the 3rd person. Otherwise an exciting hotwife story.

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by hawkeye1408/03/14

Good and Hot story!

Loved the story and the development of how you let things progress. I was pretty distracted by the inconsistent use of third person though and it confused me a few times as to who was speaking and who was being spoken about. My suggestion is to speak in first person of "I" and "My Wife" or using their names to create more clarity without the confusion or distraction. Wish I could have been there to participate in the events of this story! mmmmmmmm

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