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by Anonymous06/18/14

Nice but....

I like your stories...they have a sardonic humor...BUT...the pattern seems to be the same. When i see your name as an author...i can prety much imagine the flow.

Can you please bring in some variation ? A surprise kr a twist would be nice and would keep the readers hooked for more.

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by Anonymous06/18/14

4*

Would have been more if you'd made fewer errors!

However, well up to your usual standards.

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