Mother's Solace Ch. 01

Great start!

Give me more! I'd love to see where this goes from here!

Agreed, great start.

It's a great start, I'm looking forward to chapter 2.

Too short..

The current rating at 3.5 does not justify the story, but I do feel that this was way too short for me too rate anything. A solid effort nonetheless, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.

loved it

Great story can't wait for chapter 2

Mother's

More soon please........

Good but...

Please work on the spelling errors and just proofread it a little bit more. I think it's a great start.

this is a remarkably good story for a first-time contributor

I urge Mr. FC to continue, and I have a suspicion of where this story is going. When his mother hugs him, 19 year old Locke gets hard in his pants, his mom notices her boy's big hard on and is shocked. But his mother loves her "big strapping son," she's had to do without for so long, and her motherly cunt feels empty and bereft. Now she knows that her boy's got exactly what she needs. It's jumping around in his pants, and she's sex-savvy enough to realize that her Locke's got a pair of hot young balls to match his big cock. In fact, he's a non-stop semen producing machine, his young balls never quit, and she understands precisely where Locke wants to shoot all that semen of his. I hope and trust that Mr. FC will tell us, in excruciating detail, how Locke comes to flood his own mother's warm wet twat with all his creamy sperm.

Thanks for the support.

It really means a lot that you guys actually enjoyed the first chapter. Honestly at first I didn't plan on making a story; but I decided what the hell wouldn't hurt to give it a shot. Besides there are quite a few good mother/son stories that inspired me. I'm currently finishing up Ch.2, and I've already started a rough draft on what Ch.3 will be about. Ch.2 is a lot longer than this, and I hope it will meet the expectations of the supporters, if not exceed them.

Interested

Well written. Looking forward to chapter two...soon hopefully.

Really good first chapter

Hope it's the first of many.

I loved it - just

please don't make the mom bisexual. I am so tired of that story line. besides that though you have created some interesting characters. I am looking forward to seeing this story develop.

It's no big thing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But not just G U Y S read these stories. Keep going young man, make all the readers happy. It was a good read , some bloopers but it's your first time. Thanks for the read..

Please get an editor!

Please seek out one of the volunteer editors. There were quite a number of problems, especially with punctuation. Please seek an editor before you submit chapter 2.

I think you should keep on writing. This tale did not go nearly far enough for me. Quit teasing and get on with the story.

More please!

I think you did a great job! Longer next time would be fantastic! :)

I do agree to the editor idea, but do keep on posting.

That's one thing that I can't get over. I have so many ideas and not enough faith to post anything. I envy you, how you can write something and know it's not perfect and submit it anyway.
Please keep going, you will only get better. I think you've done the hardest part to begin with, submitting the first piece of your work.

As I'm really OCD about spelling and punctuation, this was a very hard story for me to read. Hopefully chapters 2 and 3 will be better.

It's all in the re-writing

I agree with the others: a good germ of a story, too brief, not enough detail; and no excuse for poor spelling and punctuation with so many resources available.
Don't give up and don't settle for a mediocre story.

Keep writing

I like it. Don't be discouraged by negative comments. It's great for your first story. I'd much rather read a short story then lose interest in a long drawn out story like one of the last ones I read. Please continue on

More.

Give us some more to comfort Mom!