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Committing Revenge Ch. 02

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by Anonymous06/19/14

Great potential

Poor execution. This has some good ideas, I like the perspective shift. However, the writing leaves something to be desired. Literotica has a bunch of volunteer editors who could help turn this into a really hot story.

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by paulrocker69x06/22/14

Excellent story

I love the way she publically humiliates herself in class by masturbating and fingering her pussy and asshole on the teacher's desk. Nicely done!

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by Anonymous07/12/14

Write more

I love these stories and i would absoloutley love if you wrote more.

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by zena9908/08/14

Oh, yeah

The last paragraph shows promise.

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