Golden Wishes Ch. 02

I like it

I really enjoy your writing style. You convey your meaning well while adding humorous parts to keep it entertaining. Keep up the writing :)

amazing

Slightly longer chapters would be more fun..... But still its fun...

Discovered this late...

But I went back and read the previous chapters. I too enjoyed the other genie stories and I am glad you are writing this. I am glad Jason asked Melody to be his girlfriend as this adds a romantic element I like. Hopefully you will finish this series unlike so many of the other good genie stories. Keep writing.

Keep it up

Thanks, its wonderful...

Thank You DataGrowth!

Congratulations on what is fast becoming a favourite story of mine. Having quickly read through the first three chapters I can only hope that you are able to continue this series for some time, and soon ;) .

While I agree with the other commenters that slightly longer chapters might be in order, I get the sense that these shorter, easily digestible, chapters are more your style--do whatever feels right, just, please, keep writing this enjoyable and plausible (for fiction) series.

Keep up the good work, will be following this story very closely:)

Good chapter

I enjoyed this chapter very much as it highlights the budding relationship between Jason and Melody. I also like how Melody is struggling with her slave mentality and I see a lot of growth there. I also enjoyed seeing more of Dawn. Is she one of the people that Melody mentioned that finds Matt attractive? I hope that you develop that relationship in a positive light, as I don't see her being with Matt just to hurt Jason as a thing she would do. I could be wrong of course but write your story and I will read it. Keep up the great work!

Reminiscent yet fresh.

Reminiscent of another Genie series, but fresh enough to enjoy reading. Be careful about stepping on other author's toes (plagiarism) but please do continue your story line. It will be interesting to see how your Jason character develops, and what makes him special enough to have gained his own genie.

keep em comming :D

Awesome loved it, please keep it going, i love these kind of stories and frankly whenever i find one with potential they just stop... pretty annoying so please keep going :D

More please

I'm liking it thus far. She's a cool take on the djinn.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful story, keep it up. I am in need of more!

Good story,plz keep writing

Carry on

I like it. I like the possibilities of the stories and I sort of like the characters. I mean, we haven't really had time to explore their personalities to know if we like them; but so far I think they make sense and are believable enough. The only thing I miss is side characters. The story seems to be too Jason-centred.

Is it too late to get Dawn in the picture? When she went to see him it seemed like you could go in that direction.

Just a bit of advice.

Try to make the chapters longer than one page it gets annoying for them to be single pages.

Another dead story!

And another one bites the dust. The "Genie Curse" strikes again. Another "author" looses interest in what he/she is writing and they leave the story hanging. Too bad they can't be fined for doing this crap!

Please continue

Please Please Please continue your story,
Jason has`nt even bonded with melody yet,
and I want to see Matt get his come up ants.

please

Good job on making the end more of a cliff hanger. keep up the good work please make the chapters a little longer and cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter

Get free gold!

i really want 2 read ur next chapter plz i wanna know what happened after melody became his girl friend

Great work

I love this story, please make another chapter

genie curse strikes again

Is there even one series about genies on here that is finished?

not bad

Keep up the good work can't wait for another chapter

Good staet but ....

A year and a half since this was posted, is this going to be ANOTHER genie story that remains unfinished?

Super, but too bad...

Having scads of chapters to my credit i k ow how hard it is to finish a story, but three and done?

Oh well. Maybe he got hit by a bus, or his mother found his notebook.