So often mother-son sex is raunchy and trashy, but you really make it a beautiful thing. The underlying thoughts, the worries about "sinning" coupled with the building desire and lust. I know any reader is looking forward to the ultimate, but I want to savor each moment and not lose out on anything just to witness what I hope will consummate their time together. Great story telling!
Cindy
Yes, you've continued the excellence of the first chapter, love the gentle progression of the 'sin'. You write complete stories with sufficient character development integral to the plot. Mom has needs and so does Gary and while we all feel we know where you are going, we need you to take us there in your own time. I once again look forward to the continuation of this story. I do love a good author, thanks for putting this together.
Well written, not trashy or rude. And good character building as well, the only thing I could suggest would be longer chapters. Can't wait for the next one. Thank You Cindy.
English
Beautiful!
So often mother-son sex is raunchy and trashy, but you really make it a beautiful thing. The underlying thoughts, the worries about "sinning" coupled with the building desire and lust. I know any reader is looking forward to the ultimate, but I want to savor each moment and not lose out on anything just to witness what I hope will consummate their time together. Great story telling!
Even Better
Cindy
Yes, you've continued the excellence of the first chapter, love the gentle progression of the 'sin'. You write complete stories with sufficient character development integral to the plot. Mom has needs and so does Gary and while we all feel we know where you are going, we need you to take us there in your own time. I once again look forward to the continuation of this story. I do love a good author, thanks for putting this together.
Mmmmm
Such great bedtime reading, for us :)
Melissa xx
Finally....a story worth reading.
Well written, not trashy or rude. And good character building as well, the only thing I could suggest would be longer chapters. Can't wait for the next one. Thank You Cindy.
Sinful xx
Once again! I need a bath, so naughty.
bm
Family Fun
So nice to read the story..............made me so horny and wet. Just the same way as when me and my son masturbated together the first time......
Ten stars !
Honestly, I felt like I was watching. Pace was wonderful. Very creative.
Thanks !!!
Nice Segway!
Nice segway between chapters, but still HOT! I will continue to read to see where it leads!
they were reluctant because of what happened last night after one bottle of wine
so tonight they brought two bottles and expected what?
Wow.
Very hot development. Off to read Chapter 3 now.
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