Carmen's Special Treatment

While this was fiction

It was an insult to hospital workers everywhere. Just awful.

Fictional fantasy

This is fiction. That is the point of Literotica. Fictional fantasies are not at all related to reality. I and everyone else on here knows no hospital worker would ever do such a thing. We know that. If someone chooses to take insult, well that is a risk writers run when people decide to be literal about fantasy.

No Insult

I am an RN and have been for a very long time. I wont say that this has ever happend, but its a fantasy, not an insult. Personally I enjoy reading this type of fantasy. It was well written and techically sound, Being bi-sexual myself it was very pleasurable to read

This is one of my favorite types of fantasy stories...

It was well written and excited me quite a bit. For the anonymous poster that was offended don't read it. It is just fantasy after all! And hot at that!

Innovative scenario but not that far off.

It was innovative so I gave it 3 stars - transvaginal ultrasounds have a lot of potential as medical fetish erotica subjects, but this story didnt love up to nearly the full potential. Though it was a bit of a turn-on to read, it was written in a dryly descriptive way that failed to convey the erotic emotions very well, or any humiliation, which is a key ingredient of a good medical fetish story. Also my own personal bias would have liked to see the story with the patient and sonographer of opposite sex. Im a male who worked in a community clinic for several years and can tell you that female patients getting sexually aroused by what I did to them happened much more often than you would guess, and when it did, there was an often (but not always) unspoken understanding by both parries to enjoy it as much as possible...

Thank you, anonymous

Thank you for your comment. I would agree with you that this piece has not lived up to its potential. It is not my best effort. Concerning the sex of the technician... well, this is in the lesbian section.

If you like medical stuff, I have another, much better (in my opinion) story told from the perspective of a female gynecologist, titled "Confessions of a Gynecologist."

I loved this. So hot. I'd love to read another. More of the other women who have been "treated" ;)