Rainbow Party

Nice one!

That is a sweet yet totally sexual story. It's clear that these are young people who are involved in a consensual game, maybe a coming of age rite. They are playing: rainbows, parties, boys vs. girls. Yet it's also clear that what they are playing with borders on behaviours which could tip over and become problematic.
The story combines sexiness with understanding how young people need to play at sexuality, and also gives understanding that that needs to be thought through or it can get risky.
I never once thought: 'yes, a man wrote this story'. The femininity of the characters was delicately drawn, unlike their lipstick!

Nice!

This story made me hard fast. I loved the pace of it and how it ended. Awesome story!

Rach

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I will give you one thing, Huck, you are a daring man. I've never read anything by you that wasn't ambitious, controversial, and served raw with the red part showing.

For my part, I love your style. It's great. Like a gut punch, it takes your breath away and leaves you open-mouthed, ready for the ram-rod of tight, true, uncomfortable stories that you always seem to have on the menu.

Your stories are unapologetic, fiercely so, painfully so, at times. Yet, this story was sexy and sensual and sinister and sweet, all at once.

I don't know how many fans you will make with your writing--it's fucking sentence sandpaper, abrasive and rough--but count me as one.

I think you have a ton of talent. This was an excellent story, as colorful and hard to swallow as the dicks at that party.

Beast, thank you!

Wow, Beast. Your comment is probably the best thing anyone has ever said about my work. I mean, ever. Thank you so much. Sometimes I agonize over the way my work goes over and sometimes I think I need to completely reevaluate everything and then I read something like what you wrote and I think Yeah. Fuck yeah! :)

Fuck popularity. :)

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I am feeling very grateful.