Your writing is of a good standard; the language skills you display are better than some here.. So, five stars for that.
I began to wonder if her experience was a strange erotic dream. But then I realized that it was most likely not. It was too explicit to be erotic, too obvious to avoid being puerile. Sorry.
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Anonymous06/20/14
Junk
Sorry, but this is puerile junk. Give up writing right now.
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Your writing is of a good standard; the language skills you display are better than some here.. So, five stars for that.
I began to wonder if her experience was a strange erotic dream. But then I realized that it was most likely not. It was too explicit to be erotic, too obvious to avoid being puerile. Sorry.
Junk
Sorry, but this is puerile junk. Give up writing right now.
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