This story sucks, give up now, you have no talent for this type of writing. I can't believe literotica permitted this garbage to be posted. What a waste of time.
Thanks for the good feedback, and Anonymous User, if its that bad why did you read all of it? And please, submit a story then I will give my views on your literary skills.
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Anonymous06/21/14
Very nice
I think it is time for mommy to get some from son and daughter.
English
Fasinating
That was so intriguing I'll have to read ch.1.
Piece Of Shit
This story sucks, give up now, you have no talent for this type of writing. I can't believe literotica permitted this garbage to be posted. What a waste of time.
cool more chapters
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Thanks for the good feedback, and Anonymous User, if its that bad why did you read all of it? And please, submit a story then I will give my views on your literary skills.
Very nice
I think it is time for mommy to get some from son and daughter.
Yup! Mommy and Chloe need a little attention! And I'd bet that big brother's gonna help. ;)
needs pacing. but awesome
a lot of fun. linger a little in sensation a nd emotion. check out FINC. He does a great job with humiliation.
I can definitely appreciate your type of writing. Looking forward to more :)
The haters are wrong, man. This is hot as hell.
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Sweet!
Cant wait for the next part!
Oh Yea!
Fuck yea! More!
more!!!!
More! More more!!!!! Make her show her mother and those bullies who's boss!
finish it
for gds sakes will finish the stories driving me nuts waiting for you to finish
the stoies hury up and finish it
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