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I saw the title and immediately gave this a pass, then I was scrolling back up and saw the author is YOU and, well duh, had to take a look.
Love the character so far, definitely entertaining. I can't wait to read more and learn what's really going on!
Also, I'm glad to see someone competent writing a plus-sized heroine someplace other than the fetish category. I am optimistic that Peaches will be a complex and well developed character whose physical appearance informs her identity but does not define it (like, y'know, a real person). And also that there will be none of that didn't-know-she-was-desirable-until-her-ONE-TRUE-L OVE-told-her-she-was-pretty....and then she got skinny because he gave her value or however that bullshit works.
Peaches seem to be a riot.
lol
I love the back n forth with Peaches, its refreshing, and what a way to die!
Bloody tasty, mate!
In tedious boredom, I was strolling through the literotica and found this amusing tidbit.
I am looking forward to the rest of the story.
Spelling
" Only thing wrong with that scenario was I didn't smell myself decompressing..."
I believe the word is "decomposing" unless she is kinda dumb and got the words mixed up on purpose.
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