great fantasy liked it but i think your character would have been fucking and sucking real cocks by the end....but your the writer not me all in all good work-Ron
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Anonymous06/20/14
Nice
Nice idea though it seemed a little convenient that one student had a dildo on hand.
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Anonymous06/21/14
Nice
Fun story but I think it all happened a bit too fast
I'm assuming you were going for silly comedy. Even still, it's so far fetched and rushed that it wasn't even erotic.
You didn't even take the time to describe who your character is. Hell, by the time you even identified what gender your character was, she had jammed two fingers in her cunt two sentences later.
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good fantasy
great fantasy liked it but i think your character would have been fucking and sucking real cocks by the end....but your the writer not me all in all good work-Ron
Nice
Nice idea though it seemed a little convenient that one student had a dildo on hand.
Nice
Fun story but I think it all happened a bit too fast
Love the story
Great fantasie for anyone! -Rod
Rushed
I'm assuming you were going for silly comedy. Even still, it's so far fetched and rushed that it wasn't even erotic.
You didn't even take the time to describe who your character is. Hell, by the time you even identified what gender your character was, she had jammed two fingers in her cunt two sentences later.
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