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Heck of a Good Story
Not quite predictable, with an interesting twist at the end.
A fun read from beginning to end. Probably your best story yet.
Strange
All characters in this tale were low-lives. Gina wasn't at first but she because a cheating asshole like everyone else. Hopefully everyone involved catches a nasty std, just for fucks sake. Still an interesting read.
Not a One?
Not one decent character in this whole story? Horrible view of the world.
Smart enough!
Brett was smarter than the writer gave him credit for.
Really liked this one! 5 stars!
Our "hero" has changed in the space of three pages and a few months. There were a few of holes in the story. For example: Why is he still in the "loaner" condo ten weeks after his testimony? Has "his" Corvette been "repossessed"? Does he tell Gina the truth about his deal with her husband? (If she is smart, she should have figured that out during/after his testimony. Maybe that made her love him more?) I got the impression, that while she received ten times more in the divorce settlement because infidelity was not proved, the amount was still much less than half of his assets.
Wonderful story, and funny too.
A 5 without doubt. A great telling of a story whose ending might have been telegraphed a little bit and might have been a bit too quick to close (a confrontation among and between Gina, Brett and Jerry might have provided a happy and satisfying finale), but an enjoyable read for absolute certain!
****
Brett, you back stabbing little shit! YOU GO, BRO! Enjoyed the story and the twist near the end. Kinda wish I had the money and the woman instead of my charming good looks. LOL! Cheers!
Good play of Characters Morals
Good story and plot.
I do believe there needed to be a little more sex in the sex scenes not just that sex happen. Also so of the characters needed a little more depth.
This is all minor really as it was a good read.
Good story
Almost believable with just a little doubt. How long will Gina stay with Brett after she finds out his true nature based on the opening paragraphs?
What's the rush ?.
Good overall idea, but with so much time and action happening in a mere three pages , the story ran a mile wide and an inch deep. Things really went into warp drive and the cliches started piling up after the successful seduction of Gina. I especially expected and hoped that event to be more of a challenge.
This was the best story in the past couple days and one of the few meriting a review in my eyes. The score thus far of 4.2 seems fair, so I'll abstain from voting. But when imhapless is fully on his game _ he's a slamdunk 5 star writer..
still
He was still in the condo and still driving the car because in order to take them away someone from Mr. Williams would need to "contact or approach" him which would make the judge most unhappy, as well as violating the law.
Making that judge unhappy = very bad idea.
Violating the law while making the (kind of hard-ass) judge in your divorce unhappy ?
That is a special kind of stupid.
Great Story
A very enjoyable and light hearted read.
I was expecting Brett to turn but after it looked like he was staying on script I was having doubts. The lateness of the twist was well executed.
To the BnB's out there - smell the coffee.
Nice Turnabout
Loved the main character - a dumb blond who's a guy!
Glad to see some redemption on the part of the protagonist
This was almost a humor story, especially the courtroom scene. My dad always said, "never underestimate the power of a woman," and it seems that Gina illustrated the truth of this saying. I liked the story - five stars.
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