A wonderful, fast switch. What a great friend Chrissy is! The only distraction I am finding in your stories are the occasional minor spelling or grammar glitches. Careful editing could help. You have such visual and visceral writing, easy to visualise and the words flow off the page.
English
Very hot show
A wonderful, fast switch. What a great friend Chrissy is! The only distraction I am finding in your stories are the occasional minor spelling or grammar glitches. Careful editing could help. You have such visual and visceral writing, easy to visualise and the words flow off the page.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Handyman's Memoir Ch. 11 or
More submissions by riverboy.