I loves this.. So Intense.. Reaches out and grabs ya by the throat. Like your others this one goes deep.. Keep the coming..
The breathtaking beauty of a sunset in the pictures is only rivaled by this Poet's magical words. Such a sweet metaphor.
A poem to linger ~ and reread again.
Thoughts on viewing an impressive sunset ~ one of many to be encountered in a lifetime.
deep inside and not in a sexual way.
I could see what you were saying without needing any pictures. wow, i haven't read poetry like that in a long time. it was absolutely beautiful.
unknown to those who seen it. TK U MLJ LV NV
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