All Comments on 'The Neglected Son Ch. 03'

...that he does have a perfect plan ALTHO he didn't need to b so brutal to the ballerina.

My only dislike was the rehashing of the plot. Reminded me of a tv serial recap. Boring and unneccesary. And, oh, I don't recall any little red convertibles in the 19th century. (Not that I was there!)

the father -- absolutely. Paula -- abso -- fucking -- lutely. Mindy -- initially yes, but what an awful life. Renee -- she remembered -- what's the justification now? Pure hate towards someone apparently separated from it all by age? "Chet" has lost my sympathy entirely. I hope this story changes direction!

He has done it. He has gotten every female related to him in that household. But he is becoming (if he hasn't become) that which he despises. Great story! I have to read the next part.

before this chapter, i could empathise with winchester. even if his desire for revenge did seem a bit over the top, he had valid grounds to bear strong animosity towards his dad, paula and mindy.

but now, he is just a despicable cad, hurting an entirely innocent renee, using blackmail to fuck her.

shameful! not reading this crap any further.

Great you took the main character from someone we could kinda relate to and turned him into a rapist 1*

Loving this little novel. Great storyline of mystery, blackmail and sex....eeewwww delicious

find all 3 women's birth control pills and replace them with regular aspirin? LOL Actually, Renee seems nicer than the other 2.