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Wrong section
Put it in the right one lezzs
Please don't ruin this hot story!
It would be if you added a scat chapter!
Why the fat hate?
Interestig story. Definitely want to see where it is heading. Disagree with the previous commenter saying it belongs in same sex area, the incest is the predominant theme. Just a question? Why so much fat hate? If you're going to write about a consensual encounter shouldn't there be a little more appreciation for both forms?
Great start!
This has a lot of potential. I don't usually go for forced stories, but this one set it up in a way that the reader could feel Jen's desperation. Last commenter asked, "why so much fat hate?", if I were to venture a guess it would be motive. It lends definition to Jen's desperation and extremely low self-esteem. I can't wait to read more of this!
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