All Comments on 'Power Outage'

by pacifist91w

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gnome_mangnome_manalmost 10 years ago
Lovely

Very nice story. Your images are so good.

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithalmost 10 years ago
Hot shower!

... not a cold one, LOL. A cold shower is what I need now!

The story could do with a light edit and I couldn't help wondering about the lovely lady's husband? Loath though I would be for him to intrude and spoil the sexy showering.

The pleasures of the natural shower were sensual and fun, and then you built up through the masturbation to the hot sex in a most exciting way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well Done

The joy of the moment. Well written.

Rugrat60

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

Dude, this is awesome. You expressed Indian women and her sexuality in such a beautiful way. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More garbage by an American creep.

Jain women don't go for whites

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I read and write romantic stories, complete with character and relationship development. A high percentage of my work is lesbian fiction. (That said, I have tried or will try writing almost anything!) It's rare, but I also do a bit of editing and proofreading. I love gettin...