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Ryan's Story Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/22/14

Way too short! What was that, the bare minimum Lit will allow? 1*

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by Anonymous06/22/14

uses

The author needs some help and thought as to story line as there's many repeated sections, such as: "I'm 18 almost 6ft 2", good body; slim, but not skinny body, broad shoulders muscular arms, legs and back, and my six pack was coming along nicely. I have quite light skin," which could easily be removed.

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by Anonymous06/22/14

Rubbish

Not worth time reading

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