Way too short! What was that, the bare minimum Lit will allow? 1*
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Anonymous06/22/14
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The author needs some help and thought as to story line as there's many repeated sections, such as: "I'm 18 almost 6ft 2", good body; slim, but not skinny body, broad shoulders muscular arms, legs and back, and my six pack was coming along nicely. I have quite light skin," which could easily be removed.
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Way too short! What was that, the bare minimum Lit will allow? 1*
uses
The author needs some help and thought as to story line as there's many repeated sections, such as: "I'm 18 almost 6ft 2", good body; slim, but not skinny body, broad shoulders muscular arms, legs and back, and my six pack was coming along nicely. I have quite light skin," which could easily be removed.
Rubbish
Not worth time reading
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