I suspect the author is unfamiliar with women's bodies. For sure, a woman at five feet four with double D cup breasts is unlikely to fit the description "slender". It's as if the author has merely collected a series of cliches from other stories on Literotica and assembled them in his own order without ever imagining in his minds-eye what his words mean.
Then I'm once again left wondering why people who don't even know the difference between "masseur" and "masseuse" and clearly can't be bothered to find out waste time writing erotic-massage-themed stories.
I suppose not actively awful, but really hard to find anything distinctive or positive about this story. Two stars.
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Anonymous10/24/14
A Different View
I think it is a terrific story and very believeable. Keep up the good work!
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I suspect the author is unfamiliar with women's bodies. For sure, a woman at five feet four with double D cup breasts is unlikely to fit the description "slender". It's as if the author has merely collected a series of cliches from other stories on Literotica and assembled them in his own order without ever imagining in his minds-eye what his words mean.
Then I'm once again left wondering why people who don't even know the difference between "masseur" and "masseuse" and clearly can't be bothered to find out waste time writing erotic-massage-themed stories.
I suppose not actively awful, but really hard to find anything distinctive or positive about this story. Two stars.
A Different View
I think it is a terrific story and very believeable. Keep up the good work!
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