I hope to see more in this series. I loved every bit of this. The characters seemed very real each with their own mannerism. I think it was very exciting and believe you are on to a very good series with a lot of scope to continue. The thrill is in the chase not the capture.
Islandic
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Anonymous07/13/14
Lucky family
Great story well told interesting characters one that enthralled me Alex one lucky lad
English
Uh, just did a quick read, not sure if it's already stated, but all of page one is in bold.
Nice series
Very hot story line, hope it continues
The thrill is in the chase not the capture.
I hope to see more in this series. I loved every bit of this. The characters seemed very real each with their own mannerism. I think it was very exciting and believe you are on to a very good series with a lot of scope to continue. The thrill is in the chase not the capture.
Islandic
Lucky family
Great story well told interesting characters one that enthralled me Alex one lucky lad
Great story
I liked your story very much. Thank you!!!
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