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by Ashesh906/24/14

Wow !!

a Rain Poem :5-ed .
the lines:
Thunder rumbles in the distance ....
...air shakes from the sound ......
Very Realistic !!

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by Oldbear6306/24/14

I liked this

Experienced it this morning, wish I could have stopped to watch it. I am working on something similar, about a cold front, but more focused on the clouds. Nicely done.

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by Desejo06/25/14

nice image

I think you could cut out some words and make it stronger. Nice job of catching the moment, as you intended.

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