Slowly Changing Pt. 04

Thanks

I am enjoying the series an amazing amount. Thanks for your efforts.

Clay

jumped the shark

really? serum? she went from being cold to blowing him, but then you say she jerked him off. I dunno, continuity issues, very short chapters all add up to kind of a decent idea executed poorly. I'd like you to continue, I hope you improve for future chapters.

Boobies

Now with the help of some chemical injections there are boobies. If only it was that simple, nice creative touch though. It seems that Christy is now leaning towards being a mildly dominant girlfriend. I look forward to reading more on the transition happening.

Enjoyable Reading

I do hope you continue with this as it was rather nice reading.

Hate to say...

I agree on the shark-jumping. Why not refine each part until it's ready to fit with the other one. The initial enthusiasm here doesn't mean the author should just slack off and throw up parts without refining each one.

GREAT STORY

LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHAPTER

Creative

Nicely written and imaginative please continue.

Slow down a bit

I'm enjoying your story, but you need to take a bit more care with the phrasing. Nice touch with the serum. I also like the way that Christy's character is developing.

Keep writing, I am looking forward to the next part, Still 5*

yes, need more story flow

The story is very entertaining, but you do need to keep it flowing, not jumping around. I love it, altho I got a little distracted, Please to write more, and even longer chapters with more detail.

slowly changing

i want more does he become full woman how far does he go with the changes

More to come

I am going to promise atleast two more chapters. I do plan on this ending by at the latest part 12. At this point though I am going to take more time constructing each part (as suggested by several readers) and making them more thought out. Thank you all for your support and sorry for the sizable wait time.

love it keep writing

Slowly changing

Great story please go on

write some more

like where this is going. normally not so intrigued by science stories, but this feels good

I liked it. A really fun story.

I just finished reading all four chapters. It is well written and very erotic. I hope the author is thinking about continuing it.