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by Anonymous06/26/14

Good start, looking forward to more, but I think it would have been better off posted in romance. I know there wasn't really anything in this chapter considered romantic, but posting your story in the one category is always better than different categories. I know I've lost track of stories because the chapters are posted in different categories.

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by chytown06/26/14

Waiting For Ch 2***

Needs more to be interesting.

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