But it doesn't live up the description given: "Mother sucks me and sits on my face." I'd have liked to read about the last part of that. A mother who sits on her boy's face is a caring mother. She spreads her fat cunt--the same cunt the boy came out of--all over his eyes and nose and mouth, allowing him to see and smell and taste that wonderful hairy hole between her legs. Besides, this guy's young cock must be hard as a rock and his young balls must be in a turmoil. Doesn't he even get to stick his cock up his mother's sloppy twat and blow his balls up where he was once a baby? Seems unfair to me. But 5 stars anyway, for a very original effort.
If you are going to write that little bit, stop submitting them until you have a couple pages. This is starting to be stupid. Not enough of the story with these so called chapters. Try combining all of them into one continuous story (CH. 1-4 into one submission), and wait a while until you have more of the story figured out before submitting another one. Not enjoyable to read these little one page teasers
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an interesting story
But it doesn't live up the description given: "Mother sucks me and sits on my face." I'd have liked to read about the last part of that. A mother who sits on her boy's face is a caring mother. She spreads her fat cunt--the same cunt the boy came out of--all over his eyes and nose and mouth, allowing him to see and smell and taste that wonderful hairy hole between her legs. Besides, this guy's young cock must be hard as a rock and his young balls must be in a turmoil. Doesn't he even get to stick his cock up his mother's sloppy twat and blow his balls up where he was once a baby? Seems unfair to me. But 5 stars anyway, for a very original effort.
This Ongoing Pish
Is boring the fuck out of me.
STOP
If you are going to write that little bit, stop submitting them until you have a couple pages. This is starting to be stupid. Not enough of the story with these so called chapters. Try combining all of them into one continuous story (CH. 1-4 into one submission), and wait a while until you have more of the story figured out before submitting another one. Not enjoyable to read these little one page teasers
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