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Husband's Friend Stays Over

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by dirtyoman06/25/14

Fun!!

This is a kind of fun little story. I like the way she thinks. Maybe Pete, will come around a bit more, & you can work on him.lol If you have more little stories, please post them.

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by sjgkent06/25/14

Thank you, I enjoyed it!

Yes I enjoyed your story, much more believable than most, look forward to your next offering x

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by Anonymous06/25/14

We enjoyed reading that and read below

Your story was very nice and we enjoyed reading it then my wife said "I will tell her what we did". I said no just tell how you let a friend fuck you in from of me.

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by Anonymous06/25/14

Nice story.

I liked your story. Exciting and I know my wife will want to do it when I read it to her. Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous06/26/14

Good start

Enjoyed your first story. Good theme, well presented. Not polished, but that's good and real. Lots of potential. Expecting great things now. Nice too that it's not full of spelling and grammar idiocies like some. Thanks

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by Anonymous06/26/14

forget the guy who said that your story needs to be more polished, your story is fantastic.

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by verysimplegal06/26/14

Thank for feedback

Thank you all for ur support. I really just tuped and typed and wanted this story out and thats why i only did a quick once over. I just think if I edit every single one then I would produce less than I want to.

I also want to thank those that emailed me feedback.

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by Borderman06/30/14

Loved it.

Loved it, where to next? Mmmmm

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