Thanks, glad you like it! It's my first time trying to write something. Would appreciate any feedback.
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Anonymous06/30/14
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The actual sex scene was dry. It felt as though he just entered her once and that was it. The story over all is great and I enjoyed reading it; my only disappointment was the sex scene. Still, please continue the story.
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great story
U should diffenitly add more to the store
Thanks, glad you like it! It's my first time trying to write something. Would appreciate any feedback.
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The actual sex scene was dry. It felt as though he just entered her once and that was it. The story over all is great and I enjoyed reading it; my only disappointment was the sex scene. Still, please continue the story.
Not a bad start im interested in reading more
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