- All
Comments (5) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
I like short stories but .........
No build up, no real description. Let a guy rub one out here!
Hmm...
"It was a text from his wife telling him all about it."
About what? Are we to infer that it was his wife on the other side of that hole? Or was she telling him all about her night out, presumably with some strange man?
I suppose the author intentionally left that question for the reader to decide.
Hmm...
Yes, perhaps the author did leave the last sentence ambiguous in order to let the reader decide what it means.
But I think there are enough clues in the story and elsewhere to allow the reader to figure it out on their own. ;)
I was just glad he escaped
with his penis in one piece.
very clear
I thought the ending was very clear and made the entire story considerably more erotic.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Bathroom or
More submissions by MsViolent.