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An Early Morning Intrusion

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/29/14

great

i really hope you continue this story

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by Anonymous07/25/14

Perfecto.

A perfect combination of Awww and oh yeah baby!

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by Anonymous10/28/14

Sorry to disagree, but a bit boring. Not very erotic either

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by Hugo_S03/29/15

Thoroughly Enjoyable

I found this very refreshing! You write in a completely different style to me - I really enjoyed his blow by blow thought process.
I don't quite care enough about the characters yet to demand a second part but if you did write one I would definitely read it.
V. Good. :)

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