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Keeping Company Ch. 03

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by txcracker09/05/14

Excellent !

This has all the markings of being another excellent series as Frankie's Story (which I rank right up there with Finalstand , Fat_Dad & of course RecHiker not in any order just how they came out ) . This is so fine reading . Having never into BDSM I find these stories intriguing a very different thought pattern from my usual . Thank your for an excellent series I HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE THIS SERIES ! I really like it .

Thanks again


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by spud6511/16/14

Maybe it's just me

With the multitude of characters and present to past shuffle I found it difficult to follow the story. With my "what the fuck" and "who the hell is that" I just couldn't stay engaged. Sorry, I generally enjoy your writing, just not this one.

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by siroscar06/04/15

Nice payoff

He gave someone that would lie to them and cheat on them $10 million? I could understand making sure the kids are taken care of and the grandparents also but that seems like a stupid thing to do!

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