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by Anonymous08/03/14

watch for

In the future watch for and fix such things as 'jealous? .As' the period isn't needed nor required, the sentence ended with the ? thus making for poor grammar.

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by Anonymous08/10/14

Shitty writing

Your and you're are two different things. Learn the difference, dork.

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