Not a bad first effort. It does need to be fleshed out a bit and it is a bit stiff in the telling.
...to get used! Great start for a series.
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Not a bad first effort. It does need to be fleshed out a bit and it is a bit stiff in the telling.
Sounds like Savvy's about...
...to get used! Great start for a series.
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