rightly proved later in the story.
Good start, don't stop writing. My one negative would be on the tags used. Add "cheating" maybe "wives" or "slut"....Thanks again!
Spent years in Brazil. Still don't undersand futebol. But came to understand the Brazilian preoccupation with sex pretty well Good story. 5 stars.
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must be quite stupid to not understand futebol...
rightly proved later in the story.
Nice
Good start, don't stop writing. My one negative would be on the tags used. Add "cheating" maybe "wives" or "slut"....Thanks again!
Guess I'm stupid
Spent years in Brazil.
Still don't undersand futebol.
But came to understand the Brazilian preoccupation with sex pretty well
Good story. 5 stars.
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