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Oh please yourself
It's not bad for a first time publication, and I'm not sure why you feel the need to be so negative about it. Just because you're anonymous doesn't mean your words don't have an impact. And if your goal was actually to hurt the author, just for the kicks? Then you are simply a deplorable human being. Keep your mouth shut next time.
OMG don't stop now!
I got totally carried away reading this, like it was happening to me! Am breathless, better put my clothes back on before he gets home.
Keep going
That was exciting, and I can't wait for ch. 2
There REALLY needs to be a second person tag. In fact, there should be at least 2 of them...
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