Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 02

Keep it going

Interested in how this plays out. Good job.

Thoroughly enjoyable...

This was thoroughly enjoyable to read but it seemed to end all too quickly even with the 3 pages. Very easily worth 5 stars. I'm looking forward to reading many more chapters. Thank you for sharing.

Much Better

I enjoyed the first chapter but found it to be too short for my liking. This was much better in that the entire situation has been set up and now you can go in whatever direction you wish.

I laughed at the predicament with the young female and the misunderstandings in translation. Something tells me that the larger females may end up playing a similar role, especially if they are all trapped on this planet for any length of time. Could prove to be very interesting.

LoVEd it......kEep It uP

I liked both chapters although ch.1 was a little short. Keep writing and it will turn out 2 be a gr8 series. We will be waiting 4 more 😉

I'm enjoying this so far. Interested in seeing where it goes. And why did my mind jump several marooned yrs ahead and picture several litters of half human/half 'kitties' :-D

Excellent

Keep up the good work. I hope the rest of the story stays true to the previous chapters. It is better to have short well written chapters than something that is rushed and poorly presented.

Some much like a K'zin story I read a long time ago. Excellent!

Liking it

Is it bad that I'm thinking "Halo meets thundercats"?

I like it...

I like the detail you put into the props and environment. Enough to make the reader think about it, but not so much that it drowns the story in unimportant details. I think the encounter (not the combat portion, but the joining of the two sides) was a tad bit on the simplistic side, but easily forgiven.

I do hope you continue to update this story. Would you care to share your anticipated update rate/schedule? The first two chapters came out quick, implying they were both already written when you chose to submit the first, can we expect several more to be released in the next week or two?

Update Schedule?

Hey I was just curious how often the updates are going to be, I don't want to wait years like the K'tha story. Also did you pull any influence from that story, they seem really similar and I'm just a curious person.

well done

length was much better, so was the situation setup. You do a great job at description and dialogue is cool.

Quite good

I like where this is going keep up the good work.

good storyline. nice flow. i like the subject matter. so far i rate this series 5 star.

Hooked

Now I am hooked! Thanks for the treat!

Great follow up

As the last post says, I'm hooked :)
Jason

Yeah, i like this already

I was floundering looking for a story like this, i read The Missing Dragon, Succubae Sedduction and The Path of the Necromancer. This in my humble opinion is up there with those incredible stories. love it so far
JC