I love this so far can't wait for more
I so hope that this isn't the end!
I haven't decided yet, feel free to check back ;)
I want more OMG I hate that! I was just like Lacey, so close by the end of the story but it ended before I could cum! Ugh! :(
A bit rushed and could do with a bit more character development. Several spelling errors that could be caught with a proofreader or editor.
I've read alot and I mean alot of these stories and this one is my fave!!!!!! Please write a second part.
Please, for the love of God and all that is holy, continue the story.
Please write more!! This is a great beginning. So hot!!
OK, highly improbable, but this is erotic fiction, after all, and your story is good. Or, maybe not improbable, you never know in Texas!
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love it
I love this so far can't wait for more
Omg
I so hope that this isn't the end!
re: Omg
I haven't decided yet, feel free to check back ;)
LOVE
I want more OMG I hate that! I was just like Lacey, so close by the end of the story but it ended before I could cum! Ugh! :(
Good Story
A bit rushed and could do with a bit more character development. Several spelling errors that could be caught with a proofreader or editor.
awesome!!!
I've read alot and I mean alot of these stories and this one is my fave!!!!!! Please write a second part.
PLEASE FINISH
Please, for the love of God and all that is holy, continue the story.
More please!!!
Please write more!! This is a great beginning. So hot!!
Nice Ride
OK, highly improbable, but this is erotic fiction, after all, and your story is good. Or, maybe not improbable, you never know in Texas!
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